Sentence of the day

Original sentence

The cat watched the bird.

Improved sentence 

The fat cat was silently staring at the slow bird flying in the air. 

Sentence of the day By Tama

Original sentence

The dog went down the road.

Improved sentence 

The skinny dog zipped down the steep road.

Tama's Cinquain poem

Tama and Praful's EOTC iMOvie

EOTC TRIP! from Room 11 on Vimeo.

High Ropes by Tama

Yeah Yeah! We are at Birkenhead Leisure Centre. The first thing we did was go down stairs to the rock climbing room. We ate some morning tea then we got into our groups 1, 2 and 3. When we got into our groups we found out what activity we were doing. My group was doing high ropes first. When we got to the high ropes we got into our gear and then the instructor told us what courses we were allowed to do. We were allowed to do the: centipede/floating islands/spiderweb/and there was the beam. The first one I did was the spiderweb. I got clipped up with the harness and I climbed. I was got tired but I never gave up. I was still climbing but then I yelled, "Can I come down." Then I leaned back and dropped. I felt like I was flying until I touched the ground. Next one I did was the centipede and that's even harder because it wiggles but that didn't stop me and I'm just two steps away from finishing it and I do it . When I made it up I leaned back to jump. To be continued................  here's some photos!!!!!!!!! BY TAMA

Creative writing by Tama

I can see a group of people taking photos. I can smell my stinky teeth. I can feel my tounge touching some food still in my teeth and hear birds tweeting in a tree. I think to myself I am gonna be more famous then all other zebras in the world!!!!!!!

By Tama

Creative Writing by Tama

He thinks that God is calling him to walk up those black slimy stairs with the leaves blowing
across. He is scared of those spooky clouds then he sees a bright light and he takes one step
and he can smell the slime on his shoe. He can feel the cold air howling across him. He opens his mouth and one hard blow and his mouth is dry.
To be continued.....

My Favourite Sandwich By Tama

INGREDIENTS

ONE VERY LONG FRENCH BREAD

A POT FULL OF MUSHROOM SAUCE

A BIG JUICY STEAK

SLICES OF ANY CHEESE

BBQ SAUCE
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METHOD

GET THE FRESH FRENCH BREAD AND WARM IT UP

CHOP THE MUSHROOMS THEN MAKE THE SAUCE

COOK THE BIG JUICY STEAK

SLICE AS MUCH PIECES OF CHEESE AND PUT BBQ SAUCE

THEN EAT AND ENJOY

Cat School by the Book Bandits

Book Bandits from Room 11 on Vimeo.

Have a listen to the Book Bandits and Liz perform Cat School by Joy Cowly.

The empty beach By Tama

ORIGINAL SENTENCE: THE BEACH WAS EMPTY ON THIS STORMY DAY

IMPROVED SENTENCE: THE BEACH WAS EMPTY, ALTHOUGH WE STILL WERE HAVING A BBQ ON THIS STORMY DAY

TAMA'S SELF PORTRAIT

IN ROOM 9 WE DREW A PORTRAIT. FIRST WE DREW A PICTURE OF OURSELVES ON THE COMPUTER. THEN WE ADDED ADJECTIVES ABOUT OURSELVES. HERE IS MY ONE.