Tuesday, March 11, 2014

The Sad Castle by Felix

The ruined castle watched over the joyful village as if it wanted to join in. 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Felix,
    I liked how you made the castle feel as if it was a lonely person.

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  2. Hello Felix,
    I liked how you used a picture that brought out the emotions in your sentence.
    Keep up the good work.


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  3. Wonderful descriptive writing Felix! I loved how you made the castle feel alive with emotion, but I wonder why the village doesn't go visit the castle? Perhaps there is a bigger story to tell? I would love to hear more...

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