Friday, August 22, 2014

three haiku's by Felix

Ocean

I'm as wild as the wind
as relentless  as fire
Ocean is a storm

Dark Hole

pitch black angry pit
gloomily, calling friends
mad man in sorrow

Earth

clay, dirt crumbling rock
earth is a boulder giant
man of iron stone

Take cover By Kahma

In a bright classroom sat 31 children laughing,shouting and throwing rubbers. It looked worse than a bomb sight it was like world war 4! but when Mr. Hector come storming through he had a stern look peeled on his face. A hush fell across the room and all the students stared into the stone face of Mr. Hector. Their teacher was in her office taking a call completely oblivious to what was going on. Mr.Hector took this advantage to growl the pupils. His big voice bellowed through the room ''Get back to work or else detention for 3 months"! A shiver trickled down all the student's spines. Satisfied, Mr Hector stomped out of the room next to him sat a group of girls who froze pale when his eyes came to rest upon them. He smiled triumphantly knowing that they weren't going to be disruptive again, but he celebrated to soon. As soon as he walked out of the door they continued they're talking and fighting. Now he wasn't stern nor angry he was MAD! lets hope the children take cover because it wasn't looking pretty for them...

Wednesday, August 20, 2014

Story cubes By Matthew

Story cubes are when we roll 2 dice and we make a sentence out of them,
Here are some of mine.

The barbarian wearing the helmet charged at the confused adult and child.



The guy wearing the diamond necklace carefully held the antidote.



The guy tipped the potion onto the crab.



By Matthew

Tuesday, August 19, 2014

Story Cubes by Luka

In the chest  there was a map that lead into a cave .                                                      

Monday, August 18, 2014

Tibboh Part 1


Something is bad... I can feel it in the ground... sense it in the water...hear it in the air...

Deep in the mountains of Gourdian an ёrmun was creating a stronger, bigger, smarter ёrmun called 
хerakent

Far away,  past the Korat hills and on the other side of the Lihog sea... lived Tibbohs.
Now these creatures looked like you and me, but a little smaller and...
golden
their skin was golden
The golden around their eyes was a golden white a lot like our skin colour
but the Tibbohs call this colour pelty.
These Tibbos had Divine inky hair and the elders charming moonlight hair
with highlights that looked like steel.
If you saw a Tibboh the thing you would most be amazed by is their eyes
They had such detailed pupils and then around the beautiful forest green that turned into a bright river blue with dark sparks of purple around the edges.

The Tibohs lived in a abandoned Danaldow village lost in a breathtaking
emerald forest with long lines of golden brown trunks and endless mint green leaves.
At sunset the rays of sunlight would slowly make the leaves turn red as if they had caught on fire.
The sunlight would slowly wander through the leaves till it reached the Danaldow cathedral. It rushed in through the tinted windows lighting up the velvet-like long sofas. At the very end of a sofa was Elicha, a young Tibboh reading happily an ancient book that no on had ever understood....


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Friday, August 15, 2014

The Pukeko Gazette 



Tabby cheetah crosses first play

The two frisky kittens born at Sydney Zoo with a cheetah father and tabby mother have been sighted playing together for the first time. Jade and Jasmine are two weeks old and live with their father Ganett while their mother Fushia enjoys a lateback life with her owner Miss Myller or Angela Rd. Miss Myller who recived the news this morning is thrilled to hear her kittens are finally socializing as sister and brother. Last afternoon awed passer- bys watched eagerly as Jasmine ambushed on the unsuspecting furry bundle of her brother.  Jade leapt to his haistly defence resulting in aws and cooing from the mesmorised crowd. One of the watchers, Mr Rhyan Barrington described it as ' the most amazing thing I'd ever seen the timing, the stealth, everthing.'


Wednesday, August 13, 2014

the imperial agent class SWTOR

The imperial agent class is the Sith empire version of the trooper class. Its starting planet is Hutta. Unlike most troopers it can have a sniper rifle and is more of a stealth version of the trooper class.
Its companions are scorpio and it has more.
Its weapons and armour can change from time so it can disguise and can be a civilian to a guard. Weapons can be blaster riffles to snipers.
Its ship is called the x-70b phantom; it is a prototype space ship. It has two advanced classes - operatives and snipers.

Lantern poem

Dogs
Awesome
The best pet
Playful and fun
Cute

Tuesday, August 12, 2014

Creative Writing by Shaan

Spain vs Chile in the 2010 FIFA World Cup semi-final in South Africa. It's half-time in this big semi-final and the second half kicks off with Chile leading 1-0. Then at the kick-off, the striker passes it back to the defender Arbeloa for Spain and he dribbles it in a unique style and passes it to the CAM (Central Attacking Midfielder) Andres Iniesta and Arbeloa is in the box and he rounds the defender and a one-two pass to Xabi Alonso and the Chilean defender slide tackles him and gives it a big penalty to Spain. Before the big penalty was taken, the referee gave the Chilean defender a yellow card. Arbeloa takes the penalty right in the top of the net and it is fully deadlocked at 1-a-piece. The Spanish supporters make a thunderous roar, like a tiger roaring in Bengal. Then at 1-all Arbeloa is trying to push the tackler  down and makes a spectacular pass to Spanish striker Pedro and a one touch shot near the post and it is saved by the goalkeeper and out for a Spain corner. Xavi the Spanish corner taker makes a great air pass and Iniesta headers it in the bottom right corner and not deadlocked anymore. Then a dash of thunder was red and in yellow it said 'SPAIN RULES'. It was 2-1 to Spain with 1 minute left and then the ref blows the whistle for full time and Spain win 2-1. The Man of the Match was Andres Iniesta who made Spain get in the final against the Netherlands while Chile are in the 3rd vs 4th playoff.

Alliteration

Domesticated dolphins dive dramatically deep into the deps.


hopeless happy hobo hippie hippos hope they will heavy.


Bostrus little baci boy bosses his big brother around bossily while beating up a bikkie.

Lanterne poem about my friend Kahma

Cool
Kahma
good at sports
Great at writing
FRIEND

Sentence of the day By Matthew

Task: Add two adjectives and improve the verb.

Original: The tank went across the battlefield to help the soldiers in the trenches.

Improved: The bullet-proof tank traveled across the battlefield to help the soldiers in the long trenches.

By Matthew

Monday, August 11, 2014

Eli's Storm

Storm roars to the trees

Leaves rushing to flooded grounds

Lightning tearing life

Heart of stone By Kahma

I don't forgive,

I feel no sorrow nor regret,

I take no pity or give second chances. 

No one thinks I exsist

I am the heart of  stone.

The storm by Jakob.

The sky is crying
storm's wolf is calling to me
lighting scares the trees.

Friday, August 8, 2014

Getting SWTOR


On Tuesday I got a new RPG game called SWTOR or Star Wars the Old Republic.
The game is a MMO RPG where you have to choose one faction that is the Republic or the Sith Empire and choose a class, the Republic classes are Jedi Knight. Jedi Counselor smuggler or Republic trooper. Repuplic trooper has two advance classes that are Commando and the other is Vanguard. The Sith Empire classes are Sith warrior, which has two advanced classes,  Sith marauder and Juggernaut. Sith inguster bounty hunter and imperial agent. the setting is 3000 years before the movies and a brutel civll war has broken the jedi order the remaing jedi go tyhon were the jedi were founed and the sith empire dont know where it is.
the starting planets for most classes jedi knight and conulser starting planet is tyhon the republic trooper
starts on ol tron or something like that sith warrior and inguster start on korrben. fetueres are you can only play on starting worlds like tyhon or korbeen galatic starfighter is a features  that came out renctly that is a sape batlle to use this feture you must of fully donloaded the game the green bar in the launcher
and the proggres bar in the game show's how much progrgres your done feats are things that you can buy like sprint and force jump force powers like force push that can be used to attack heal temmpory become powerfuller wepons are imporent things in the game that can used to attack ememys or on a pvp server other players. types of servers there are a few types of features  roleplay server is a plain server and other players cant attack you pvp servers are servers were people and you will be able to attack other players but there is a little bit of roleplay in these types pvp evoment server are just like pvp servers but you cant attack other pepole on certin places role play pvp servers are pvp and roleplay servers combained.  by Alex

Lantern Poems by Shaan

Cats
speedy
playing, cute
meow, meow
Purr

Fish
scaly
loves swimming
yummy to eat
lunch


Sentence of the day By Matthew

Task: Add a clause to make it a complex sentence.

Origional: Before..... the soldier thought about his loved ones at home.

Improved: Before going to war, the soldier thought about his loved ones at home.

The day Saki came to school. By Matthew

Today my cat Saki came to school. He followed me across Great North Road. He joined us at P.E. He was trying to join in with skipping and then followed us back to class. At 10:00am he wandered into Room 9 and did maths with us.  He loved having all the attention and scratches. He even sat on my lap while doing maths with Ruth. He started hiding behind the couch. At one stage one of my friends told me he wandered into Room 11. Then Tracy (my mum) came to pick him up but Saki didnt want to leave.  I gave him a cuddle, said "Bye Saki", and he went home.



By Matthew

Thursday, August 7, 2014

Lantern Poem by Luka


Sentence of the day By Tama

Original sentence
The dog went down the road.

Improved sentence 
The skinny dog zipped down the steep road.

Creative writing By George


As the sun begins to die and dark beings to rise it start to rain. We get into our cabins. At first though the rain was going to be okay. Suddenly we hear something that sounded like a bull hitting a metal fence. Then we run out to the deck. We see rain hitting the side of the boat like a mythical creature hitting it.

BY George



Tuesday, August 5, 2014

Cinquain poem about my dad

Daddy
funny, loving
caring, helping, smiling.
Making his family as one.
!HUMBLE!

Alexandra's Problem

Once upon a time there was girl called Alexandra Poppy-Flower Tyler Reed Alison-Potter and she was 10 years old.
Alexandra lives in a cloud tree with cloud berries and the cloud berries came in different flavours like ice cream, raspberry etc.
She was known for her blue glasses, white hair and bright orange freckles.
Alexandra had lived happily but the only problem was she couldn't seem to remember where she left her glasses only the problem was that they were always on her face.
She is normally the type of person who is patient but when it comes to her glasses she gets really frustrated and once she nearly hurt a cloud berry gardener.
Once she was looking for her her glasses when a mirror fell on her head, suddenly she saw her reflection and to her surprise she found her glasses on her head.


The End.

By Minh Anh

Monday, August 4, 2014

Matthews Cinquain poem



Saki
Funny, nutty
Running, chasing, cuddling 
Keenly chases mice families
Lazy

By Matthew




Lantern Poems By Matthew

Cats
Scratching
meowing
Lazy kittens
cute   





Long 
Lizard
Skaily skin
Lays massive eggs
Pets

By Matthew

The End by Kahma

On a planet called Earth there's a country called New Zealand. In that country there's a school called Grey Lynn. In that school there's a classroom called Room 9. In that class there's a crowd of children and in that crowd there's a girl. That girl has a brain and in that brain there's a idea. That idea is a phrase to use at the end of a story its called... THE END!   

The Winter Garden. By Jakob.

Icicles hang down off the trees like fingers reaching down to the snow. The blanket of snow looked as luxurious as a king's quilt, but in reality was bitterly freezing. Spiralling jewels of snow slowly drifted into the newly cushioned seat. Evergreen forests now look like fluffy clouds as they are covered in snow.

SENTENCE OF THE DAY BY HARRY

ORIGINAL:The  tank went across the battlefield to help the soldiers in the trenches

IMPROVED:The muddy tank tumbled across no mans land to help support the soldiers in the blood soaked mud of the trenches.