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Monday, August 4, 2014
SENTENCE OF THE DAY BY HARRY
ORIGINAL:The tank went across the battlefield to help the soldiers in the trenches
IMPROVED:The muddy tank tumbled across no mans land to help support the soldiers in the blood soaked mud of the trenches.
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