Hi Floyd, I liked the way how you made your poem rhyme and the sound of the rain at the end was so powerful that I just wanted to listen to your poem again and again and again! I can tell you have been working really hard because you have TWO of your work on the blog. Well done Floyd!!
Hi Floyd I cant view your poem. How about showing me on your computer when I am next in your classroom.
ReplyDeleteHi Floyd,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way how you made your poem rhyme and the sound of the rain at the end was so powerful that I just wanted to listen to your poem again and again and again! I can tell you have been working really hard because you have TWO of your work on the blog. Well done Floyd!!