SENTENCE OF THE DAY BY HARRY

ORIGINAL:The  tank went across the battlefield to help the soldiers in the trenches

IMPROVED:The muddy tank tumbled across no mans land to help support the soldiers in the blood soaked mud of the trenches.

THE DOOMED VOYAGE by Harry

I hold a small painting of my family in my hand. It ripples violently, then flies out of my hand. I  peer ahead of our doomed ship. A massive wave swamps the deck washing many over board and snapping our front mast. The ship leans forward, and then the rotted ropes that support the mast snap and the ship is flung back. I go to my room. Water is nearly up to my knees, and many pieces of furniture are going every where. Everyone screams for dear life. Lightning strikes the back of our boat turning it into a violent blaze that lights the night. I pray to Neptune for this storm to stop! For this murderous storm to stop! Why did I have to go on this voyage?Why? WHY!?!?

THE DEVIL'S WHEEL By Harry

The time of happiness is up. The ungreased gears of the power surge creak up. I'm in the sky now. I still taste that disgusting low caliorie ice cream. Suddenley I hear a shunt of a lever. Screams make my ear drums bleed. People strapped tight in front of me hang on for thier dear lives. The wind trys to rip me in half. Suddenly, the person in front of me let out the most vile vomit ever. I'm relived that the low calorie ice cream taste is gone, because there's nothing worst than that. I can now sense everyone's fear of dying. I too end up thinking I'm goning to die but just then, a forgiving mechanic below pulls a lever. The devil's wheel stops moving. I unstrap, I spit out the vomit, fall to the ground, and smooch it.

Harry's face

This week in room 9 I made a self portrait of myself on kidpix! Hope you like it!