Storm, rain, lightning, thunder, and red boots.
This is my story.
My name is Dora the Explorer, and I am a secret agent working for Playhouse Disney Spying Organization, working towards the defeat of the most elusive and dangerous criminal alive today.
Swiper.
My assistant, Boots is a field agent currently working in North Korea checcking for illegal communist activity.
We located Swiper in downtown Tokyo last night dealing arms, our agency is working closely with the Tokyo police at CCTV camera footage of the dirty criminal.
The boss came into our suveillance camera room.
"I hear you're looking for Swiper"
"What's it to you" I said.
"I've made posters" He said
"Thats helpful" I mutter under my breath.
That's a great piece of writing, Toby! It's really creative, I know some people in Intermediate that can't write that well. I would love to hear a complete story about "Double o Dora". As for feedback, try and make things a little more 'clear-cut'. Other wise this is amazing. Keep it up!!!
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