Thursday, February 27, 2014

The girl with hair like flames by Poppy

If you go down main street, follow all the signs. Go left then right, and you'll find yourself at the start of Gooseberry Lane. Down at the bottom of the lane there is a huge house, covered in thick green ivy. 

In the attic a of that house there lives girl called Paige, Paige was ten years old. She was known for her hair, which is the colour of flames.

Sometimes you can see her sitting in her room looking out the window,her green eyes piercing through you. She is the black sheep of the family, her mum, dad, brother and sister all had black hair.
Her dad had banished her to the attic when she was 7 years old because she had red hair, her dad called her mean things like a "freak of nature".

Because of all the time she spent alone she had never made a friend, but sometimes she swears she can see a boy about her age across the street in a attic, with hair like flames.
Sometimes she waves, but he never waves back, every day she wakes up and looks out her window, hoping to see the boy with hair like flames.

By Poppy.





1 comment:

  1. Fantastic Poppy! It has the makings of a much longer story!

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