Sloth Cinquain Poem By Luka

Tama's Cinquain poem

My Cinquain Poem by George

Cinquain poem on tigers by Shaan

Tiger

scary, stripy

hunting, eating, roaring

Lives in the Indian jungles

Fierce

Metaphor-by Felix

Room 9 has been learning about figurative language such as metaphors and similes, here is mine:

Eli's similie

Hi its Eli and this is my similie for Anzac!

Hunters metaphor

My group did metaphor's, here's mine

To my beloved brother, Arthur 

Love Livana

Free Writing

Once their was a beautiful queen called Ruth. Ruth had beautiful long hair. Once Ruth was taking a walk in the garden and realised something. She found out that her mother was keeping a secret from her, a bad one. Ruth ran back to the palace to look for her mother's diary and looked everywhere, but the last place she looked was the library. Ruth was never allowed in the library. Ruth always thought something secret was in the library but what? When Ruth was discovering the library she found a lever. Ruth obviously pulled it, I mean what could happen? Ruth found a secret pathway to the most deadliest place on earth...

 …TO BE CONTINUED…

BY CASSIE

Getting an Xbox 360

Getting an Xbox.

On Wednesday I got an Xbox 360.

The console came with minecraft Xbox 360 edition a 4gb console and a wireless controller.

When we opened it up we set it up. Then I got onto minecraft I started building my house. My house was only supposed to be 2 levels but I made it 13 levels tall and I made a pool  but I upgraded it so mobs wont come in.

I also made a bridge.

by Alex

LOST 1 By Kahma

I woke with a throbbing head in the middle of nowhere only trees and thorn bushes surrounded me. I had no memory of what had happened last night or the one before. I couldn't remember anything. If someone did this to me whoever they are clearly didn't want me to find my way home because I was lost. I had a million questions bubbling in my head but one replayed itself over and over again blocking the others out. Where was I? I looked at myself. My clothes were ripped, torn and covered in mud. My nails were equally caked with dirt, I was a mess. I decided that sitting down was not going to get me anywhere. So I decided to walk. I struggled, but I managed to heave myself up. I staggered at first then I started to pick up the pace with a light walk. As I trudged along my eyes suddenly caught sight of a guava tree. I could recognize it anywhere seeing I wanted to be environmentalist when I was older. It was about 27 metres away from me so I sprinted. My lungs said stop but my stomach said hurry up! When I finally reached the tree I realised the berries were too high and out of my reach...    

Sentence of the day By Minh Anh

Original sentence :

The dog lay on the back porch.

Improved sentence :

The coconut colored dog lazily stretched out on the back porch of the long forgotten house of Miss. Hactma as a shadowy figure suddenly appeared behind him.

Book review by Minh Anh

This my book review of Hetty Feather by Jaqueline Wilson.

Hope you enjoy the book review and will enjoy the book. 

minh anh book review from Room 9 GLS on Vimeo.

Alex's book review

I did a book review on Avengers dissembled

by Alex

Sentence of the day

This is the original sentence. 

Mary cried when her fluffy little hamster died. 

I'm going to improve the verb and add and an adverb. 

Mary sadly burst into tears after here poor sad hamster went to hamster heaven for the rest of its Days. 

random things

This is a story of random things like puppets and marshmallows and gummy rings.

 Pixels and prickles and Mr tickle, shoe laces and satin and a boy who speaks Latin.

Kites and koalas and water spiting lamas, mascots and moths and slow slow sloths.

Hamsters and helicopters and freaky doctors, aliens and astronauts and a criminal at court.

Number plates and notebooks and Italian cooks, recycled robots and rose water and a 

silver

quarter.

French fonts and fire alarms and a island full of palms, jelly and jumping jacks and a field full of 

yaks.