Monday, July 21, 2014

Sentence of the day By Minh Anh


Original sentence :
The dog lay on the back porch.

Improved sentence :
The coconut colored dog lazily stretched out on the back porch of the long forgotten house of Miss. Hactma as a shadowy figure suddenly appeared behind him.
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1 comment:

  1. KhanhSaturday, July 26, 2014

    That is a very good sentence. Well done Minh Anh!

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