Ghosts story review By George

Yesterday I read a story called Ghosts. It was a non-fiction story. It was about people who got killed then turned into ghosts or died by ghosts that had taken control of their cars in Hong Kong. One of the storie was about a man called Mr Brown who was a miners.Mr Brown didn't check the cables then they he and other five other miners fell to their death. Then they turned into ghosts . Some inserting words were struck and concentration. I gave this story a 5 out of 5.