Task: Add two adjectives and improve the verb.
Original: The tank went across the battlefield to help the soldiers in the trenches.
Improved: The bullet-proof tank traveled across the battlefield to help the soldiers in the long trenches.
By Matthew
Original: The tank went across the battlefield to help the soldiers in the trenches.
Improved: The bullet-proof tank traveled across the battlefield to help the soldiers in the long trenches.
By Matthew
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