Terror
My brow weeps with sweat, my eyes twitch restlessly. I embrace my starved, bare body lying on the sub-zero ground frozen. I'm unable to move in my nightmare.
Frozen blood surrounds the wound where the syringe stabbed, and I cry for my family in my forlorn sleep. Then I awake and my soul fills with terror.
Hey Oska
ReplyDeleteI absolutly love it and the way you discibe it it just blew me awayI hope you write another one of your stories again.
Azure
hiya,
ReplyDeletegreat story. continue the great writing :):):):)
from minh anh
hiya Oska,
ReplyDeleteGreat story. It kinda gave me goose bumps.
Keep up the good work!
:) :) :)
Hi Oska,
ReplyDeleteI love this story and the way you hooked the reader in.
Hi Oska that was super interesting and I really like the the story line
ReplyDeleteI was hooked
Hi Oska, even though it didn't have a lot of quantity it has loads of quality.
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