"Steady Chestnut," Lucy said laghing as she and her chestnut brown horse streamed through the woods, the shaded leaves only a blur.
"Come on boy," Lucy said brushing her golden brown hair out of her eyes,.
"I think it's time to go home," she said while turning him around and slowing him to a trot.
"Come on boy," Lucy said brushing her golden brown hair out of her eyes,.
"I think it's time to go home," she said while turning him around and slowing him to a trot.
Hello Holly,
ReplyDeletegreat decribing words i loved them
from William
Hi Holly,
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing story and I can't wait to know more.
Really cool!
Hi Holly,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used interesting adjectives to paint a picture in the readers head. It felt like I was in the story. Keep up the good work in part two.
Hi Holly,
ReplyDeletenice adverbs continue the good work!!!
Hi Holly
ReplyDeletegreat writing i love the way i thought
the house was talking
Love Cassie