Friday, July 20, 2012

The Fearfall at Rainbow's End by Mia V

I could feel the bar as I gripped it tight holding on for my life. I could hear my mum screaming. All I could see was the darkness of my eyes shut tight. All I was thinking was I can't wait till its over. Then we got to the end and it was all over and I felt sick.
"I'm never doing that again in my life," I said.

6 comments:

  1. Mr BarkerFriday, July 20, 2012

    I would be scared too. The height, it's a long way up or down.

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  2. SeporaMonday, July 23, 2012

    Hi Mia,

    I know the feeling - and when you get to the stage when you have to do the ride you think...why!!!

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  3. OliviaTuesday, July 24, 2012

    Hi Mia,

    I havent been on the Fearfall but when I read your lovely, descriptive writing it felt like I was on the ride.
    Great job.

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  4. JenniferWednesday, July 25, 2012

    Hello Mia,

    I have been on the fear fall and it is really scary. I think you have described everything I heard,saw (although my eyes were closed) and felt.

    Well done,Mia.

    Jennifer

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  5. Arlo and CharlotteMonday, August 13, 2012

    Hi Mia
    that must have been so scary I would have felt sick too next time we go to rainbows end im going to try to go on the fair fall because ive never been on it before.

    From Arlo and Charlotte
    Rm 13

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  6. Phoenix and SydnieTuesday, August 14, 2012

    Hi Mia
    We would be really scared too, if it was us.
    I hope you had fun on the rest of the rides though.
    It sounds like it would have been fun as well.

    By Phoenix and Sydnie

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