I hate the taste of peas
clambering dow my throat.
I hate the smell of garbage
whooshing through the window.
I hate the look of dogs
meddling with me.
I hate the sound of my lego
breaking onto the floor.
I hate the feel of wet muddy sand
tingling my toes.
clambering dow my throat.
I hate the smell of garbage
whooshing through the window.
I hate the look of dogs
meddling with me.
I hate the sound of my lego
breaking onto the floor.
I hate the feel of wet muddy sand
tingling my toes.
Great Jake. I love this poem.
ReplyDeleteHey jake,
ReplyDeleteI love how you did your poem with a lot of wow words. Although you have to do a bit of editing.Everything in your poem is great. :)