Friday, May 17, 2013

Five Senses by Oceania

I like the taste of ice cream
zooming down my throat.

I like the smell of chocolate
booming out of a cake tin.

I like the feel of soft playdoh
masssage my fingers.

I like the sound of singing 
swishing sweeting through the air.

I like the look of a waterfall
speeding down the rocks.

4 comments:

  1. SeporaFriday, May 17, 2013

    Hi Oceania,
    I like the image of the play doh massaging through your fingers.

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  2. AnetemaMonday, May 20, 2013

    Hey Oceania,
    I love how you used wow words in each sentence.I also love how you used the word booming in your sentence 'I like the smell of chocolate booming out of a cake tin' instead of coming.Amazing.

    From Anetema

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  3. RuthTuesday, May 21, 2013

    Anetema! I love the comment you left for Oceania. I can tell you read her work very carefully.

    Oceania: You put a lot of work in to this poem and it really shows. Well done :)

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  4. GeorgeThursday, August 15, 2013

    Hi oceania
    your 5 senses was awesome.Awesome wow words.

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