Tuesday, May 7, 2013

My Holiday Snapshot by Jakob


I was freaked out. Everyone was screaming. I could see Wayne and Dylan looking up at me suspiciously. The voice of superman filled the half pipe.The metal seat belt of the roller coaster was locked in place. I could see the rest of movie world towered in front of me.




4 comments:

  1. Hi Jakob,
    Your writing reflects the mixture of excitement, anticipation and dread I always feel on roller coasters!

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  2. Woooow I can't believe anybody would want to go over the top.

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  3. it is such I cool poem Jakob such great adjectives.

    Your class mate Hunter

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