Friday, November 4, 2011

Humiliation by Bryn

Humiliation is darkened red.


Humiliation tastes like liquid nitrogen going down your throat.

Humiliation smells like the toes of a giant.


Humiliation is the mouth of a bully talking yo you

Humiliation sounds like a sniggering crowd.

Humiliation haunts for life.   

2 comments:

  1. Mrs Devcich, Tirimoana SchoolFriday, November 04, 2011

    Hi Bryn
    We looked at your poem but it is very hard to read on the black background. Do you think you could get it edited so everyone can see your fantastic work.

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  2. GWYNETHFriday, December 09, 2011

    HI BRYN
    I liked your poem .It reamind me of alexs poem.but a little bit more scaryer.

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