Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Joy by Floyd

Joy is golden yellow.
Joy tastes like a juicy mince and cheese pie,
Joy smells like macaroni and cheese.
Joy looks like a field of flowers,
Joy sounds like laughter and happiness all together.
Joy feels like being awarded with a prize.


3 comments:

  1. MaheleWednesday, November 02, 2011

    Hey Floyd,
    I like your poem about joy .A thing that I like about your poem is that joy is got something to do with cheese and it was very descriptive I like your picture of the cup.

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  2. Room 2Thursday, November 03, 2011

    Dear Floyd,

    We really liked your poem. We liked it because it was about joy. Keep up the great writing.

    From Room 2

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  3. Year 3/4 Grey Lynn ScribblersFriday, November 04, 2011

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