Terror is the colour of the dead night sky taunting you. It is smoke squeezing your lungs, It smells like dying flesh. It's a great shadow hauling you down, It is an arresting scream. And feels like piercing pain.
Hi Alex I liked your poem that you wrote about TERROR it was really scary but I still liked it even though it was scary.The part that really scared me the most was the part that said "In an arresting sream"But if you read it well recording it that would be awesom. From Gwyneth
What an amazing poem. You certainly captured the emotion of terror very well. I liked your use of descriptive language . I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
I love your poem on terror, Alex! I've already read it about 5 times. the description is amazing. you are an amazing writer. I can't wait until your next post.
Hi Alex
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem that you wrote about TERROR it was really scary but I still liked it even though it was scary.The part that really scared me the most was the part that said "In an arresting sream"But if you read it well recording it that would be awesom.
From Gwyneth
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ReplyDeleteHi Alex
ReplyDeleteI really like your post on terror .What's your favorite part ?
Mine's when you said It's a great shadow hauling you down.
From Isobel
Hi Alex
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing poem. You certainly captured the emotion of terror very well. I liked your use of descriptive language . I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Sandie
I love your poem on terror, Alex! I've already read it about 5 times. the description is amazing.
ReplyDeleteyou are an amazing writer. I can't wait until your next post.
I like your poem on terror
ReplyDeleteits really descriptive and is well thought out.
your'e a great writer keep it up
Nice terror poem and it looks pretty true about the lungs
ReplyDeletethat is a great poem! I have loved this time we've been quad-blogging!
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