Invisible is the most faded red. It leaves a bitter taste inside your mouth, It smells like water, of nothing. It looks as if no one ever notices you, And it sounds like echoes of voices. Invisible is an empty feeling in your heart.
Hi Mahele, Your poem is amazing. I love your description. your poem sounds very much like being invisible. I especially love "And it sounds like echoes of voices"
Hi Mahele, I really like your poem.I like the way you described how it fells to be invisible and what colour you think it is.Keep up your great poem writing.
I noticed your poem and think you write really well! :o)
ReplyDeleteHi Mahele, Your poem is amazing. I love your description. your poem sounds very much like being invisible. I especially love "And it sounds like echoes of voices"
ReplyDeleteHi Mahele,
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem.I like the way you described how it fells to be invisible and what colour you think it is.Keep up your great poem writing.