Friday, November 26, 2010

The Littlest Clown Fish

Once upon a time, there was a little brave clown fish named Red. Red lived in a world full of water that has huge sea volcanoes and heaps of beautiful coral.
One day, Red was forced to go to his Granny's anemone to give her some of the best seaweed in the world. While he was swimming to his Granny's anemone, a Great White Shark named Sharky appeared out of nowhere.
Sharky said, "Where are you going with that basket?"
"To my Granny's anemone that is yellow," Red said, not knowing that Sharky wanted clown fish for dinner. Suddenly, Sharky stole Red's voice.
Sharky then went to yellow anemone and said in Red's voice
"Granny, can you please come outside."
 Granny went outside and Sharky stole her voice and then he ate her up.
Red gained his voice back after a while and went to his granny's anemone and said, "Granny, are you here?"    
"Yes I am," said Sharky in Granny's voice. Red then went to his Granny's room, not knowing that Sharky was in a clown fish suit.
"Granny, what big eyes you have," Red said.
"All the better to see you with," Sharky said.
"What a big mouth you have," Red said.
"All the better to eat with" Sharky said. Red knew that Granny didn't like eating that much, so he instantly knew that it was Sharky.
"What did you do Granny?" Red yelled.
"I ate her up and now I going to eat you up," Sharky growled. Suddenly, a pack of ten orcas went inside the humungous anemone and killed Sharky. Red then went inside the body and pulled Granny out. They lived happily ever after.

By Kyle, Year 5

2 comments:

  1. good writing kyle it was a cool Store lots of smile face

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  2. Great writing Klye what a nice story .

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