Nicholas Landall was working on an old spit fire engine when he heard a car roll into the car park. His brown messy hair popped around the door. It was the local air force wanting him for war. Nicholas refused to go but he had too. He went back walking along the foot path with the sun shining on his tan skin. When he got home dinner was waiting for him. The sad news was shared that he had to go to war, his hazel eyes started to go watery. His mother cried her eyes out when they shiped Nicholas out to Greece. He flew an old spit fire, his six foot two body squished inside the cockpit. His leg got burnt in his plane when he landed back at base. Nicholas was thinking about his mum at the time. He felt a pain in his leg. Nicholas had a fifty calibre bullet stuck in his leg from a gun in Greece. When the war finished he returned home with a big scar on his leg. He was twenty four years old. His was the same, apart from him seeing men, women and children suffering in the war.
By Mitchell year 6
NICE work Mitchell I like who you put the whole slid show together(:
ReplyDeleteTalofa Mitchell , the photo looks great. Who took it?
ReplyDeleteAs for the writing Mitchell....good job and I love the sentence describing
Mr Landalls messy hair popping around the corner, gives me an image of him being sneaky. Sounds like you have thought hard about the effects of the war on the men and women who fought for our freedom. Good job , keep up the good writing.
Hi Mitchell,
ReplyDeleteI wonder what would have happened if he really really refused to go to war?