Todd was in the army and went to fight against the Italians who had sided with Hitler. He saw the Italian army and he loaded his tank and he shot until he had no bullets left. He left to go to war when he was 25 years old and came home at 31 years old. He lived in Grey lynn, Auckland, New Zealand in a small house with his kids and his wife. Todd was born in Wellington, then he moved to Auckland. That’s where he meet his wife and that's where his wife had kids. When Todd Carney came back he lived a good life with his family. He was lucky to have survived the war. By Tyreece, year 6
Tyreece,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you described how he shot the gun until there were no bullets left. I could almost hear the gun running out of bullets. He must have been scared.
Great writing. Keep it up ! I like your style !
Andrea
NICE work Tyreece I like the way you put your writing together I like the name Todd Carney from MITCHELL(:!
ReplyDeletegrate work Tyreece I like your narrative and I like the why you said that he loaded in a tank.
ReplyDeleteNICE work Tyreece your narrative and were he lived and AWESOME!!!!! (:
ReplyDeleteGreat writing tyreece youre narritive was very good and i like
ReplyDeletethe way you sumed up youre narritive.
Hi Tyreece,
ReplyDeleteTodd must have been very scared when he saw the Italian army. I can tell because he used up all his bullets! he was away for a LONG time. Was he married before he went to war?
Great work!
Esther :)