I was snug and warm in my comfortable bed when I heard the rusty portcullis slowly start to open. The tall turrets loomed above as I started to hear the horrifing moat creatures slyly start to creep up! The wooden draw bridge snaps closed like the jaws of pirhanas.
By Hannah
that is a very nice pice of work from seko
ReplyDeleteHi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you used horrifying.
I liked the way you used the word slyly…
From Matthew Minh Anh
WOW!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat a fabulous writing you've done about a ancient castle Hannah,and love the word slyly in your writing and hope you post some more of your fantastic writing!!!!!!:)
Wow han,
ReplyDeleteit was an amazing story and it was creepy
loved it