I ran across the brown grass passing lonesome trees. The heat of the African sun was killing me. I could feel mosquitoes biting me. Sweat and loose hair fell into my mouth as I ran away from the lion that was chasing me. The sound of my hoof beats and the lions roars were deafening me.
Hi Leo
ReplyDeleteVery dramatic, a real cliff hanger. Will there be a part two? I felt like I was there watching the whole event. Keep it up!
Kaia
Hey Leo
ReplyDeleteAwesome describing words cant wait to see what happens next.
I wish I could describe as well as you keep it up
Felix w
Hi leo,
ReplyDeleteWow, it really leaves me thinking.
Great pic.
From Amy
Hi Leo
ReplyDeletewow cant wait to see what happens nest