A deserted beach
The water lapped at the sun-kissed sand as seagulls screehed over head. The salty sea slooshed around like water in a bowl, even though it was very calm out to sea. Fish swim in circles and nibbled at the ocean floor, while sand floated over the soft dunes.
By Anouska
Hi Anouska,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you said the sun-kissed sand. It painted a picture in my head even though there was a picture.
From your friend,
Minh Anh
AWESOME JOB!! Ü I liked the WOW words and yeah… the drawing is cool as well. Ü Ü Ü SMILEY FACES! Ü
ReplyDeletehello Anouska,
ReplyDeletefabulose WRITING you've done its amazing,I can even imagen the deserted beach.Hope I can read more of your fantastic writing on the BLOG!!!!!!!! :)