Monday, April 14, 2014

A deserted beach

The  water lapped at the sun-kissed sand as seagulls screehed over head. The salty sea slooshed around like water in a bowl, even though it was very calm out to sea. Fish swim in circles and nibbled at the ocean floor, while sand floated over the soft dunes.
By Anouska

3 comments:

  1. Hi Anouska,

    I love the way you said the sun-kissed sand. It painted a picture in my head even though there was a picture.


    From your friend,

    Minh Anh

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  2. AWESOME JOB!! Ü I liked the WOW words and yeah… the drawing is cool as well. Ü Ü Ü SMILEY FACES! Ü

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  3. hello Anouska,
    fabulose WRITING you've done its amazing,I can even imagen the deserted beach.Hope I can read more of your fantastic writing on the BLOG!!!!!!!! :)

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