Tuesday, April 8, 2014

Lamborghini by Jake

The shiny silver paint hurts my eyes as it speeds past at what seems to be the same speed as a pentergren falcon at 320 KMH. The V shaped front pierces though the air as it screeches to a halt.  The doors whirr open like wings of a pentergren falcon. The lights stare at the tar like the eyes of a bird of prey.

4 comments:

  1. great work jake and nice lamborghini

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  2. Hi Jake,

    Great work on the Lamborghini. I really liked the last two sentences, they were awesome. Keep it up, From Shaan

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  3. I really like the way you decribed the lamborghini with the second to last sentence

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  4. Jon (Jake's dad)Thursday, May 15, 2014

    Good idea Jake the front of the car does look a bit like an eagle (falcon)!

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