Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Sentence of the Day by Felix

Original sentence:
Tim ate a ham burger quickly.

Improved sentence (add an adverb, adjective, improve the verb and add another clause):
Tim hastily gobbled up the juicy hamburger as if he thought it would run away.
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5 comments:

  1. MelMonday, April 14, 2014

    Wow Felix that makes me hungry reading your improved sentence, nice job!
    You have me worried, perhaps my next hamburger could run away too?

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  2. tamaMonday, April 14, 2014

    hi felix that sentence made me feel hungry for a burger

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  3. lukaMonday, April 14, 2014

    Hi felix
    I really like your sentence of the day and your

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  4. CassieWednesday, April 16, 2014

    Hi Felix,
    I love your sentence of the day
    From Cassie

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  5. ShaanMonday, May 12, 2014

    Hi Felix,
    What an awesome Sentence of the Day. You had improved a lot.
    From Shaan

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