Thursday, April 3, 2014

The Evil Scientist by Luka

I followed the evil scientist into a dark room. He drunk a potion and then poof! He turned into ninja. He had two swords, lots of shurikens and a bow and arrow. He chased me out of the room waving his swords in the in the air. Then he stopped and and drunk another potion and turned into a crazy toad. I laughed but it shot poison. I dodged it then I jumped on it. Squish! It was gone. The end
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5 comments:

  1. AnonymousMonday, April 07, 2014

    Hi Luka,
    I liked how you said that the toad shot poison at you but you dodged it.
    Did you use a story starter to help you?

    From Matthew and Minh Anh

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  2. AnonymousMonday, April 07, 2014

    Ninjas and crazy toads! woah what an awesome story!
    You have a fantastic imagination and I love how you used onomatopoeia to add more detail.
    Keep it up Luka :)
    Bryan

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  3. GeorgeMonday, April 14, 2014

    HI Luka,

    I Really like your Evil Scientist story It was really funny Keep Up thE Good work

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  4. Jake haslerMonday, April 14, 2014

    hi luka
    awesome story. I really liked when the scientist turned into a ninja

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  5. AlexWednesday, April 16, 2014

    Hi Luka lollollollollollollollollollollol i like your story
    From Alex

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