WALT: write descriptions
I could smell refreshing air from the countryside. I could see the frozen water cracking under my feet. I could hear the ice cracking under my boots. I could fell that something bad was going to happen. I felt my ice skates cuTting though the ice and taste the ice when I fell over.
By Anton
I could smell refreshing air from the countryside. I could see the frozen water cracking under my feet. I could hear the ice cracking under my boots. I could fell that something bad was going to happen. I felt my ice skates cuTting though the ice and taste the ice when I fell over.
By Anton
Hi Anton,
ReplyDeleteI like your discriptive language you used in your writing.I also like the picture you picked,it goes very well with your writing.
Great work.
Jennifer
Hello Anton
ReplyDeleteGood writing - makes me feel cold as I read it. I could easily imagine slipping over on the ice. Just like your recent skiing mishap!
From your Auntie Sandra