Thursday, May 23, 2013

Five senses by Ben


I like the taste of pizza 
sliding down my throat.

I like the smell of mint
freshly picked of the plant.

I like the sound of fire
crackling in the fireplace.

I like the look of my family
grinning in a photo.

I like the feel of blankets
rubbing against my skin.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Ben!!!
    I love how you wrote you liked the smell of mint picked from a plant!
    So do I!

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  2. william and isaiaMonday, May 27, 2013

    hi ben !!!
    i like the sound of your poem ringing
    in my ears,good poem
    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  3. Awesome descriptive writing ben!

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