Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Five senses by Eli


I like the taste of cheesecake 
crumbling in my mouth.

I like the smell of gas 
oozing into the car window.

I like the feel of my brothers soft cheeks 
stroking my hands.

I like the sound of my favorite song 
bursting out my headphones.

I like the look of the sunset
booming with an orange sky.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Eli,
    your verbs are so disruptive. you should write poems a lot!

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  3. Hi Eli,

    Your poem is awesome!!!
    It paints a picture in my head.


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