Thursday, May 23, 2013

The Hymn Of My Home By Toby

WALT: use onomatopoeia (technology) 

The microwave whines,


the fridge zaps,

the tap gushes,

and the central heating shheses.


The kettle squeaks,

the T.V sings,

the computer purrs,

and the BBQ creaks.


The table slams,

the phone chimes,

the clothes dryer swirls,

and the dishwasher rumbles.


The sink drowns the water,

the timer yelps,

the heat pump whooshes,

and the clock quacks.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Toby!
    I like how you said the T.V sings and the timer yelps.
    It's like a human
    Thats also a wow word!

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  2. Kia ora Toby,
    I wonder how your family get quiet time with the continuous "hymn" of your home.

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