Wednesday, September 18, 2013

St Lukes Hall shared writing by George, Josh and Oceania

Juicy hamburgers went down my throat. Loud teenagers texted on shiny phones. People moaned with hunger. Refreshing ice cream, cold like the north pole. Icy cold drinks zoomed down my throat. The strong sent of butter chicken blowed up my nose along with delicious hot molten chocolate cake. People dropped food.  I held a light smooth tray tightly.


5 comments:

  1. Awesome wow words!!!! Loved it!

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  2. Hi George,josh and Oceania!
    Thats a fabulous poem! I also love the MC DONALDS picture!Great job,Keep up the good work!

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  3. Hi Oceania,Gorge,and Josh,

    Your disriptive words just grabed me! your writting is awesome you should start writting

    poems all the time! TEAMWORK!

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  4. Hi Oceania, Josh, and George,

    Your poem is so cool and the pictures are awesome

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  5. Hi George, Oceania and Josh
    I like your wow!!! words. Cool ST Lukes food court
    you guy's should make more

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