Friday, May 9, 2014

Beware of the GOD By George

We try and turn the ship around but it was too late. Twenty people died by a mythical creature. Then we see a face in the clouds. "It is a god!", yelled a person on deck. The god said, "Go away, you can't run from me", but they refused to go away so he did ten bad things to them, then they went away.


3 comments:

  1. Hello George,
    awesome writing you've done keep it up:)

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  2. Wow that cloud really looks like a face

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  3. Hi George,
    That cloud is really good and it does look like God is in the clouds.
    Keep it up,

    From Shaan

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