Tuesday, May 27, 2014

Power surge By George

I see people and rides but it's blurry. My friend holds me tight in terror. I sniff the fresh air but before I know it this stink smell is in the way. I should have had a snack before I came on this ride. Suddenly the ride stops in the air. Who will get us down?

3 comments:

  1. Hi george
    I like your intersting writing and your freaky end

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  2. Hi George,
    Great writing about the power surge.
    Keep it up,
    From Shaan

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