Monday, May 5, 2014

Sentence Of The Day By Eli

Original Sentence:
The window broke.

Improved sentence:
The tinted window shattered unexpectedly as the see-through shards glided to the polished wooden floor-boards.
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5 comments:

  1. RuthWednesday, May 07, 2014

    wow that is such a good sentence from seko

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  2. CassieWednesday, May 07, 2014

    I loved how you said unexpectedly
    cassie

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  3. Matthew & Minh AnhWednesday, May 07, 2014

    Hi Eli
    I like how you said the tinted window.

    From Minh Anh and Matthew

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  4. Shaan and AlexThursday, May 08, 2014

    hi eli
    good sentence about the broken window because it made it really interesting
    From Alex and Shaan

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  5. Luka and GeorgeThursday, May 08, 2014

    Hi Eli,
    We like your wrting, because it is amazing. keep work

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