The Lamborghini quickly zooms past me as the gleaming wheels blind me. It runs like a bull angrily running you over. The doors open up like a bunny putting up his ears. The small wheels glow like a glow stick at night. The light is so bright it is like a angel from the heaven.
Hey George,
ReplyDeleteamazing description writing I just love it,and the way you did it and said,the light was so bright it is like a angel from heaven,it was just breath taking. Hope you put more of your fantastic writing on the class blog.
Hi George
ReplyDeleteamazing writing!!!
I loved it,the picture was really cool.
keep it up
HOLLY : }
yes i agree with holy its good writing from seko
ReplyDeleteHi George,
ReplyDeleteI loved how you said when the doors go up it looks like bunny ears
Cassie :D
Hi George,
ReplyDeleteI like the description and the picture you did.
From Shaan and Alex
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ReplyDeletegood story george keep it up
ReplyDeleteHi George,
ReplyDeleteI like your writing and your picuter
Hi George, awesome similes and descriptive writing. Can't wait to hear your next story.
ReplyDeleteFrom Toby
Hi george,
ReplyDeletesleek car you have there.
keep up the great work.
From Amy.