Tuesday, October 14, 2014

BLT!!!!!

Bobs heart was hammering as he was being chased by a cheetah. Through the vines he saw a cafe and said "I feel like coffe and a BLT". As he ran in the cafe he closed the huge doors and realised it was a steampunker factory, he turned around slowly and saw a gigantic crablike robot clanking to him and said "would you like some tea", Bob spoke hesitantly "can I have a coffe and a BLT" "yea" said the robot clanking around. So they ate and drank their food, while watching coronation street.  Then Bob asked the robot if he'd help get rid of the cheetah the robot said"ok", so the robot walked out side and kicked the cheetah into a hole and threw a BLT in its face THE END.
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8 comments:

  1. LeoTuesday, October 14, 2014

    Hi sek,

    Sounds cool I think u should make a few more maybe make a series maybe BOB and ROBOT GUY put some more peps in a hole.

    From Leo :)

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  2. JakobWednesday, October 15, 2014

    Hi Seko,
    That really made me laugh. I loved when MR. robot guy threw a BLT at the cheetah. LOL.

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  3. TobyWednesday, October 15, 2014

    Hi Seko,
    I loved your story, it was very creative and original, and very funny.

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  4. HarryWednesday, October 15, 2014

    HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!Really funny and made me feel like a blt........ really good descriptive language and colourful vocabulary mmmmmm bacon lettuce and tomato sandwich

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  5. AnonymousFriday, October 17, 2014

    Hi Seko,

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  6. AnonymousFriday, October 17, 2014

    It was a really funny story and a yum sandwich

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  7. RuthFriday, October 17, 2014

    hi seko funny story keep it up :) :)

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  8. AlexMonday, October 20, 2014

    hi Seko.
    you did a great and funny story.
    from Alex

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