Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Sentence of the day

Original Sentence: The flowers fragrance went across the living room.

Improved Sentence: The dancing flowers, magic fragrance flew across the beautiful living room.
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3 comments:

  1. TobyWednesday, October 15, 2014

    That was a great sentence Leo,
    I love the description in the improved sentence, keep up the good work!

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  2. PoppyWednesday, October 15, 2014

    Nice job Leo!
    I love the way you used personification to describe the flowers.
    Nice job!

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  3. AnouskaWednesday, October 15, 2014

    Hi Leo!
    Great sentence!
    The personification was really good!
    Well Done!

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