Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Sentence of the day


Original sentence
The cat watched the bird.
Improved sentence 
The fat cat was silently staring at the slow bird flying in the air. 


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6 comments:

  1. MatthewTuesday, October 21, 2014

    Hi tama
    I loved the way you describe the cat and the bird.
    I love the picture.

    From Matthew

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  2. KahmaTuesday, October 21, 2014

    Hi Tama,
    Love the writting but I love the fat cat piture more!

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  3. AmyTuesday, October 21, 2014

    Hi tama.
    Love your descriptive words, the picture cracks me up though.
    Keep up the good work.

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  4. Minh AnhTuesday, October 21, 2014

    Hi Tama,

    I loved the sentence but the picture was superb!

    Minh Anh

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  5. EmilyTuesday, October 21, 2014

    Amazing sentence hilarious picture

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  6. AnouskaTuesday, October 21, 2014

    Hi Tama!
    Great writing! Keep up the great work!
    By the way the picture is so funny

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