Wednesday, October 15, 2014

Sentence of the day

Original Sentence: Jasmine smelled the flowers fragrance then picked one

Improved Sentence: Jasmine viciously sniffed the flowers fragrance then plucked one.

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2 comments:

  1. LiviWednesday, October 15, 2014

    Great creativity leo loved it!

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  2. AnouskaWednesday, October 15, 2014

    I love how you wrote how she smelled the flowers!

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