Tuesday, March 25, 2014

An ancient castle By Lotta


I gingerly meandered up to the half cracked drawbridge as the rusty portcullis rose timidly. The watery moat is misty but I can just make out the outline of the murky swamp creatures. Night suddenly falls as I stare up to the find the lonely, medieval, huge turrets gloom over the isolated land. A shadowy figure gravitates towards the cracked and foggy window and stares back at me...

by Lotta

2 comments:

  1. Wow Lotta I loved your writing about the ancient castle. Your descriptions were so vivid. I would love you to finish this, I would like to know who the shadowy figure is.

    Sandie

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  2. Hi Lotta,
    I love the way you gave the castle feeling
    I was soooo cool and kinda creepy
    Liv

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