I could smell the hot dogs from a long way away. I thought I was going to be sick. I could hear the wind crashing trough my ears. I could see the sky clearly. I could feel my heart beating and the cold air blowing in my face. I could taste the cold air and the candy floss I ate before the ride, which was a big mistake!
We enjoyed your story Cassie and Donna particularly liked the way you have written capital letters and fullstops. Well Done!
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