We stood in front of the iron gates. They were about as high as two buses on top of each other. They opened at last. We came in front of the tall turrets and windows. In front of us a metal door swung open like a mouth. Out came an English man with a suit. I looked back and saw the long wooden drawbridge come back up. There was also a swimming pool, then the man said it was a moat.
Hi Luka,
ReplyDeleteI love your simile "They were about as high as two buses on top of each other"
Similes are a fantastic way to create a picture in the readers mind.
Thanks for sharing your story.
:) Bryan