My heart was beating. An old, slimy, wet staircase appeared in front of me. "What shall I do?" I asked. But nobody was there. All I heard was the wind howling. My hands were shaking. I was scared. I didn't know what to do. It was a horridle day. There were grey clouds everywhere. I saw bright lights in the sky. It was so dark.
HELP ME...
By Cassie
HELP ME...
By Cassie
Hi Cassie
ReplyDeleteI LOVE how you made your writing really descriptive .
I really painted a picture in my head
Holly :]
Hi Cassie,
ReplyDeleteYour writing was so descriptive and interesting!
Do you know what will happen next in the story? I'd love to know!
Maya Room 11
I'll help you Cass! Love Mum x
ReplyDeleteHi Cassie
ReplyDeleteI like how you described how you felt. Perhaps you should add a bit more about where you are.
Kaia