I gazed at the blurry sky, the taste of my toffee apple swishing in my mouth. The whining wind wipped at my ears as the smell of fresh polar-air blasted up my nose. I felt the blood rushing to my head... OH NO! MY SEAT BELT IS LOOSE! Suddenly I felt dizzy. The soft white clouds streamed past my eyes as I heard a deep rumbling sound that I haden't noticed before.
Well done Noush I love the way you used heaps of describing words.
ReplyDeleteLivie
very dramatic and descriptive I felt like I was there .
ReplyDeleteHi Anouska,
ReplyDeleteI dont like your writting I love it I love your words so much I feel like im actually there expierencing it!!!