Task: add two adjectives and improve the verb
Original: The grass moved as the breeze passed through it.
Improved: The healthy moist grass shivered side-to-side as the breeze swirled through it very gingerly.
Original: The grass moved as the breeze passed through it.
Improved: The healthy moist grass shivered side-to-side as the breeze swirled through it very gingerly.
Hi Azure. Great use of adjectives to make the grass come "alive". You have painted a picture in my mind. Well done, Liz
ReplyDeleteHi Azure,
ReplyDeleteI loved the sentence. Well done!
Minh Anh